Rewrite an email

Turn a muddy email into a shorter one that asks for one thing.

1. 1
   Put the ask first

   Open with the decision you need. Move context under it.
2. 2
   Cut the apology lap

   Remove 'just', 'circling back', and sentences that restate the relationship.
3. 3
   Leave one path

   End with a single question. Do not offer three ways to reply.

What you’ll get

The rewritten email, then a one-line note on what you cut.

Example, not your data

Can we move the review to Thursday? Yes or no is enough. The draft is ready. I need the slot before I book the room.